Band logo reflection

I think wer are going in the right direction with the logo. As the smoke and change in font adds an attraction form our target audience. However i think we need to make the logo brighter to corresppond with the up beat tone of freddys music. Also the need for images of freddy is imperitive, as we need to sell him to our target audience as the star, also mabye intwineeing pictures of the let down as well. However the logo does looks very proffesinal and we are going in the wright driection with it.

I dont not believe that this logo represents the style and genre of music of the band. as i think the colour are too suttle within comparisent to the band on a whole and the lyrics in the song. As we are trying to create a unique band, with a style that has never been seen before. but i believe this logo conforms to too many genric convention of mainstream bands and does signfy the style of the band to the audience which will affect the marketing of the band.

The logo below is a combination of the two logos. and i believe it works really well as the dark colours signfys the meaning behind the song/band which we are trying to project, along with the bold FREDDY which markets him as the 'star' of the band and gives him domiance. Also i like the the scribbled qurkey writing in which the let downs is written as it projects Freddys domiance however still marketing the let downs.